Tuesday, April 29, 2014

Narrative

Narrative from Robert Troup on Vimeo.

12 comments:

  1. You did a good job of producing a clear storyline. I liked the use of sound effects to help the viewer understand the emotion.

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  2. Awesome video! some of the cuts were very harsh but it was a very entertaining piece. Well done guys

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  3. I really liked the camera work and editing. The scene where she's rocking in the chair and then the bunny appears is my favorite!

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  4. I like how you changed the story. It was still suspenseful and the bunny was still creepy, but the ending was nice. There were some really good shots as well.

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  5. Hey, the video was funny! I liked the way the bunny appeared to haunt her. Some dialogue was out of sync. Also wished I could see the guys face what they talked in her room.

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  6. I thought the elements of humor were nice and of course the moment when Mr. Kickers opened the shower curtain was the funniest. The were a variety of shots and that kept it interesting.

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  7. This was very different compared to your main idea, but it think it worked. It turned into a bit of a parody; which isn't bad. Good job!

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  8. We did an awesome job man! Little quirks here and there, but overall the video came out great :)

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  9. That was funny, I think some of the audio could have used some transitions, and some of the cuts were a bit choppy, but nice work overall!

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  10. Good work guys. This was well shot. Funny, but balanced.

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  11. Really loved the sound effects - especially when she opened the shower curtain. Clean camera work! Great job!

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  12. It was funny and the sound effects were great. I think the girls acting made it slightly less serious than it should have been. The ending was also very good. Nice effects!

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