The red treatment sets the appropriate tone for the story.The typeface and vertical placement also is fitting. It would be more appropriate if the bear were a rabbit and if there was more visual attention on the toy. It blends into the surrounding too much. The toy is a character just as much as the girl and should have more emphasis.
The red treatment sets the appropriate tone for the story.The typeface and vertical placement also is fitting. It would be more appropriate if the bear were a rabbit and if there was more visual attention on the toy. It blends into the surrounding too much. The toy is a character just as much as the girl and should have more emphasis.
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